Hello everyone, for some reason I could not get the toondoo link to save on this page. So I saved it as a picture.
Collaborative writing is a group of two or more people that work on a paper or a piece of writing together. As you can see here, we have two guys at the office working together to create a perfect paper. One will take the outline for the writing piece, and than the other will piece together the draft. Than, with revision one will write the final piece as the other puts together other elements of the piece of writing to make the project great.
Next time make sure your text is between 150-250 words. Try to use more I's. Overall, great job!!
ReplyDeleteGood that you found a creative solution to your problem of not being able to embed your toondoo. There are some problems with mechanics in your text. I loved the toondoo!!
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